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Below are the winning entries and runner ups in the Harvest of Hope writing contest.
Poetry
1st place winner
Photo by Salazar Jack
Hope by FRANJA RUSSELL
We cling to it in the face of disaster and disappointment. We wrap ourselves in it as we put one foot in front of the other to keep moving through endless days of health, emotional, and financial challenges. Hope can lead us to the light at the end of the tunnel. If the hoped for goal is not realized, Hope weakens, thins, fades. Yet, it takes so little to restart Hope: ~ a friend who listens and encourages ~ a small improvement in the problem ~ new interest that distracts from the problem. The new interest can... ~resurect a skill or activity we once had time to enjoy ~lessen the grip of current circumstances ~reduce the tension that's kept our breathing shallow. Is Hope a self-delusion? Or is it hard-wired into us as a survival trait? I don't know, but... I can't quite give up on it.
2nd place winner
Photo by ReneeIlene Spiritweaver
Dearly Departed
by RENEEILENE SPIRITWEAVER Sometimes, I think I hear
the wind whisper, like an indrawn breath
or a dry leaf fall with the sound of a footstep
but when I turn, there’s no one there.
Sometimes, I think I see
a shadow in the shadows
or someone...from the corner of my eye
but when I turn, there’s no one there.
Sometimes I think I feel
a phantom touch
or someone near
but when I turn, there’s no one there.
Was that you?
Or did wishing make me sense you near?
The wish that when I turned, you would still be here.
Short Non-fiction
Photo by Bookie Balogh
Hope by ROCKY VALLEJO
Among the myths and legends of the Greeks is the tale of Pandora. Greek mythology's first woman and mother of all humankind, Pandora is sometimes depicted as a cunning temptress or a childlike dupe. But no matter the character's persona she becomes an unwitting tool of cruel gods in causing great sorrow to all those who come after her.
In all of these stories Pandora willingly or innocently opens a jar or other container in which lie the evils or "Nosoi" of the world: illness, plague and disease. Once released these spirits fly out to inflict humanity with pain and suffering that continue to this day.
After the Nosoi have departed one spirit remains in the jar which is either reclosed or left ajar by Pandora. This is "Elpis"... Hope. Hope is all that is left to Pandora and she holds it closely to her in that vessel.
What is Hope? The Greeks often depicted Elpis as a young girl holding flowers. Youth and promise are symbolized in this. In Christianity Hope is one of the three great virtues: Faith, Hope and Charity/Love. Hope within this context is defined as "the expectation of and desire of receiving; refraining from despair and the capability of not giving up."
Hope is a child's first step, a seeded field and the continued heart beat "beep" registered on a monitor in a hospital room. It is prayers for the dead, prayers for the living and a prayer uttered in a deep breath as one's feet hit the floor in the morning during dark and difficult dawns. It is a hand reaching out in need during flood, fire and famine. It is often the one thing that stands against the worst that life and death have to bring us in this world filled with "Nosoi."
Hope is both a noun and a verb in English. It is a thing or feeling inside us that in itself nudges us to act. Hope is a seed planted that we must constantly nourish with a positive light, water with our tears and fertilize with mulched doubts. We hope and in hoping we move to make it so.
The English artist, George Frederic Watts, created a painting over 100 years ago which he called "Hope." You can see it online at:
http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Watts-Hope2.jpg
In the painting a woman sits blindfolded and barefoot on a rock or orb amidst a sea or flood strumming the final string of the harp held in her arm. In spite of overwhelming affiction she continues to pluck that one string. She is hardly the Greek Elpis bearing flowers but she is as much a striking symbol of Hope as any other.
It is necessary to hope and act upon those hopes. A thousand food kitchens, ten thousand hospital rooms and 100,000 classrooms depend upon that harvest of hope in each of us in our thoughts, words and deeds.
Hope; and in hoping act; and in acting shed a bit of light on the path of another and on your own path as well.
Memoir
Photo by ReneeIlene Spiritweaver
My Avatar / My Self by RENEEILENE SPIRITWEAVER I was rezzed on August 1, 2009. At the time of this writing, I am about 3 months old, but I’ve done more in that 3 months than my human Alter Ego, Lisa, out there in RL, would have thought possible. It’s been one adventure after another, and that’s the word that has come to define my (second) life: Adventure. You see, Lisa has a Panic Disorder. I won’t bore you with the clinical details, or disclose too much personal information about my human self, but suffice it to say that Anxiety Disorders make it very difficult to do things. She’d tell you, if she was in a bad mood, that she’s a coward, that’s she’s afraid to do everything. But I agree with her more when she’s feeling better about herself….who is more brave, someone who can climb a mountain just because it’s there? Or someone who has to fight themselves every time they have to do something? If it takes an effort of will just to do everyday stuff, than I think it’s pretty damn brave to still get up each and every day and go about your normal activities. To someone with emotional health issues, every day is the adventure. Imagine having to fight yourself every morning! Lisa is doing better than that, but still, it’s a challenge. Which is where I come into the story. Three months ago, Lisa was taking a class in Second Life for Libraries, and so, she created me, and named me for someone who was very special to her who didn’t get a chance at a First Life. But I’m living a Second Life for more than my namesake. I’m giving Lisa a taste of the freedom she’d have without those pesky Panic Attacks. She’ll laugh, and tell you to look up “Dissociation” in a medical dictionary, but we’ve talked about this, the two of us (as much as you can talk to the different parts of yourself). Am I the person that she wishes she were? Or am I the person she really is on the inside, under the Panic Disorder? Did I tunnel my way out and burst into this strange new world, eager to break free of the constrictions she finds in RL? I’ll laugh and tell her she thinks too much. Just shut up and enjoy it. That’s what I’m here for. I’m all about breaking boundaries. In the first three months of my (second) life, I’ve done so many things that she wouldn’t do in RL. The places I’ve seen! I’ve climbed a Mayan pyramid in Mexico (and flown back down!). I’ve flown up to the top of the Eiffel Tower. I’ve had a Guinness in a pub in Dublin with a guy I just met. I saw China and Japan and India. I visited a museum in virtual Bucharest, the place where Lisa’s father grew up. I went surfing in Hawaii and rode a whale! I’ve taken a boat ride through Costa Rica. I’ve even gone back in time and out into space, where no human has gone before! While we were looking for interesting sites in outer space, we found the Star Trek Museum and various Star Trek sims. That was a lot of fun! I picked up some free Starfleet uniforms and I even got her to unwind enough to buy me Klingon and Andorian appearances (avatars). Besides being Klingon, I can also be Andorian….or a: tiger, dolphin, cat, dog, a boy, a girl, a unicorn, a Pegasus, a butterfly, an Andorian and a Klingon! (Whew!) I found a really awesome Robot Museum, where you could sit on this platform and the wheels grind and turn you into a robot. How cool is that?! I began volunteering for the Alliance Virtual Library and Rachelville and made some wonderful new friends who started to teach me the basics of building. I joined the SL synagogue and made a couple of friends there as well. I’ve gone to live readings and parties with fun themes over at the West of Ireland Library and gone clubbing and shopping with some of my new library friends. I’ve ridden a Jetski clear across three sims (and had it returned to me after Lisa had to reload SL – LOL – but what fun!). Who knows what I’ll do next? Every day is an adventure in Second Life. And, of course, I’ve taken Lisa along for the ride. Whether I’m the real inner person or just a useful tool for escaping the constrictions of her Panic Disorder, we’ve had a great time together so far. And who knows, maybe someday soon, Lisa will find it easier to go out and do things without me! How’s that for hope?
Fiction
1st Place Winner:
Photo by Amalia Broome
Angel of Death by AMALIA BROOME
She hovered outside the hospital window, waiting for the sun to set. She hated this shift, after sunset was the busiest time for her. But to graduate up one level to the Celestial Choir, she had to finish two more years as the Angel of Death. And most of her work was done after the sun went down, when the soul was relaxed and serene and was ready to be removed. She moved closer to the window, the sun reflecting a brilliant orange fire in the glass. Her wings gently brushed the pane and inside the hospital room, the baby in the bassinet stirred. The Angel knew that when humans were close to death, like this child, they were given another sense; whether it was a sense of their pending death or the presence of the Angel, was not known. God had told them, ‘never ask questions…just accept what is’. The Angel sighed. The door of the room opened and a couple walked in. The parents. A young couple in their late twenties, looking drained from the strain of sadness. Behind them, a nurse and a doctor walked briskly into the room, and began looking at tubes and charts, checking the monitor that blipped continuously to the beat of the baby’s heart. For the first time, the Angel focused on the small body in the bassinet. A girl. Tubes in her nose, a small white cap on her head....she looked only days old. Sometimes, she thought, this job was almost unbearable. But all Angels had to do a rotation on the Death Watch. Angel Gabriel said it built Angel-character and made Angels appreciate Heaven. She knew, when this was over, and she was in the Celestial Choir, her voice would ring the loudest to rejoice about the joy of being in Heaven. Perhaps one day, this babe would be one of the many cherubs that flew around, fanning the Angels as they sang. The sun was almost fully set. The Angel drew back slightly, preparing to enter the human space. Head bowed, she suddenly raised her wings to their full span and was gone, leaving the child to live a few more hours. On the other side of town, in a convalescent home, an old man lay dying; no family or friends to stand by his side. The Angel drew herself into the room. No doctor hovered, no nurse bustled in to check his heart rate or pulse. The Angel knew this man was very old for a human. Almost 90 years old. He could no longer function in life, therefore, it was God’s will that he come home to Heaven to free his soul. The man stirred as the Angel drew closer to the bed. She bent over him and placed her mouth onto his, drawing his soul out of his body with his last exhaled breath. The soul, captured in her mouth, felt tingly and warm….a good man would cause this sensation. A bad or evil man would cause her to feel a cold, oily sensation. She left the man’s body and opened her wings. In an instant she was at the entrance to the Pearly Gates. She expelled the man from her mouth into a box, waiting outside the Gate. Turning, she left quickly. Angels were not allowed to witness the transformation of the soul. Around her, the other Death Angels flew in and out quickly. The Angel went about her job throughout the night. One thousand, seven hundred ninety nine souls. Taken and deposited. Tonight only four were distasteful to her. Finally, she returned to the hospital room where she started. She had allowed the child to live a little longer, perhaps to allow the young parents time to accept the inevitable. She entered the room and again the baby stirred. The parents stood holding hands, sobbing openly. A priest stood behind the father, his hand on the young man’s shoulder giving him what comfort anyone could. A nurse stood silently in the background….waiting…..in her mind, already preparing to wrap the child in a blanket and have it taken to the morgue after the final moment. The Angel stood over the bassinet and lowered her face. The child stirred and opened her eyes briefly. A glimpse of me, the Angel thought….God had given the babe a glimpse of the Angel of Death to lessen the young soul’s fear. The baby, quiet now, lay relaxed…waiting. The Angel placed her mouth over the child’s. Never before had a soul tasted so sweet! Amazed at the flavor of the soul, the Angel opened her mouth in wonder. The sound of the heart monitor droning the heart’s death was the only sound in the room. Suddenly, the mother fell to the floor, wailing inconsolably, rocking back and forth. The father raised his hands and covered his streaming eyes. The flavor of the soul increased in sweetness! The small soul escaped from the Angel’s open mouth and flew unerringly back into the child….the babe stirred, then whimpered. The mother quickly rose and reached out to touch the baby. The monitor beeped in rhythm to the beating of the small heart! The nurse stepped forward in amazement, felt the baby’s neck then rushed from the room, calling for a doctor. The priest crossed himself. The baby cried once then opened her eyes, looked fully into the face of the Angel of Death, and smiled. The Angel, knowing she would be reprimanded, moved away from the bassinet. The sound of wings unfolding were covered by the grateful sobs of the father. "Thank, God! Thank, God!" he cried joyously. The Angel moved slowly to the side of the room. A doctor rushed in and examined the tiny body. Shaking his head, he turned to the parents. "Even doctors can be wrong sometimes." he said. " She seems so much stronger now. I think she’s going to make it!" The mother, unable to contain her tears of joy, stood touching the child’s cheek tenderly with one finger. The Angel sighed and the baby turned her head as if to say goodbye. "Now we can give her a name." the father said with confidence. "Yes," his wife replied. "Her name will be Angel." And the Angel of Death sighed. The sun began it’s cycle of a new day. And God smiled.
2nd Place winner:
Photo by ReneeIlene Spiritweaver
Hopeless by RENEEILENE SPIRITWEAVER "Do you want to wind up dead?" The words stung almost as much as the mage bolts that followed, as Ilene's shields collapsed. Bolts still hot enough to singe her hair and leave tiny criss-cross scars on her bare arms. "No." Ilene stammered. "Of course not." She was a bit intimidated by old Wizard Pietr. How she’d managed to get apprenticed to him was beyond her. She was hopeless, and she knew it. Her thoughts were interrupted as the Wizard continued, "That's exactly how you’ll wind up….dead, if you let your shields collapse like that during a real battle." She nodded glumly, and avoided his gaze. Pietr put a gentle hand on her chin, raising the girls eyes to meet his. "You can do this. You have the knowledge; your technique is flawless. The energy is there. There’s nothing holding you back but yourself." But he could see she still didn’t understand. He dismissed her with a wave of his hand and an admonition to practice. As soon as Ilene had closed the door behind her, Pietr levered himself out his chair. What was he going to do with her? He needed a second opinion. He took up his cloak as he left his cottage. A rough path led from the village through the forest that bordered it. He didn’t mind the walk, inhaling the fragrance of the forest, and exhaling a good deal of the tension the girl had brought out in him. Renae's cottage was not far away and he was met at the door by Tigris, the Witch's familiar. He had known many familiars in his time, including his own, and though she talked to him rarely in her dry mindspeech, he knew the striped jungle cat with the magnificent golden eyes had a fine sense of humor. "Greeting, Tigris. You are well, I trust?" He reflected for a moment on how like she was to a cat, though he kept the thought very quiet in his mind. Like her lesser cousins, she liked an air of silent mystery. She nodded silently and led him around the cottage to the garden. There, he found the witch herself on her knees in among her plants, carefully snipping buds of the bitter-root herbs in her garden. After each snip, she placed a finger on the break and he could see, with his mage sight, a small green glow encompass her finger, and heal the break. She looked up at his approach, and smiled in greeting. "Pietr…." She said, rubbing her soiled hands off on her apron, as she rose. "I wasn't expecting to see you today. Weren't you supposed to be training Ilene all afternoon?" "That's why I wanted your advice. Can we talk…?" Renae led Pieter inside her cottage, wiping the dirt from her garden off on her apron. Tigris stayed outside, and lay down in the heat from one of the hot springs. It wasn't until they were both seated and held cups of warm peppermint tea in their hands th
at Renae asked, "Well?" Pietr sighed, something he seemed to do often lately. "The girl just doesn't have faith in her own abilities. She’s afraid…of everything. She has the power, the skill, …." He described the problem. "I just don't know what to do with her." "Well," Renae answered. "I never thought I'd live to see the day when Wizard Pietr admitted fallibility." Pietr chuckled. "There's always a first time." "I don't know…" Renae's eyes looked to the shared past. "I remember a young Wizard in training who was so confident in his own abilities that he proved his Masters wrong." Pietr smiled. "They told me I couldn't do it, and I didn't believe them, so I did it." Renae nodded. "Magic is funny that way. It only works if you believe in it. And it only works for you if you believe in yourself." They sat silently for a few moments, remembering. There was a scratching at the door. It was Pietr's familiar, a Tree Wyrven, a dragon in miniature. Xaranthus was just as intelligent as Tigris, although his tendency to belch flame at unexpected moments irritated the jungle cat no end. He had singed her tail just the once, but that was all it took. He hopped in, blowing a ring of fire into the hearth which had been allowed to cool while the witch was outside. The puff of smoke which followed resulted in a few coughs, and Xaranthus peered over his shoulder to see if the witch had noticed. She had, of course, but hid her smile so the Wyrven wouldn't see. Xaranthus, like Pietr, sometimes had an air of inflated dignity. When she looked up from the tea, she noticed Pietr's eyes were focused on the Wryven with a look on his face that had spelled trouble for many a master when they were young, and many an enemy when they were older. "Oh, no." She said, "I know that look. What are you up to?" Pietr leaned forward eagerly. "Magic only works if you believe in it.….." By the time he finished explaining his idea, Renae was smiling too. They made their way back to find Ilene and send her off on her new assignment. * * * Ilene placed the cushion and her small pack beside the tree at the very top of overlook hill. When Wizard Pietr returned from his visit to his friend, the Hedge witch, she had expected to be turned out of her apprenticeship as the failure she knew she was. What she hadn't expected was this. The wizard told her it was time she called her familiar. Every witch or wizard had one but she knew she wasn't ready. Ilene sat with her back to the tree. At first, all she could think of was the scratch on her shin, her bruised ankle, an itch on her nose, then her left leg. But soon, she began paying more attention to the forest around her: The wildlife that passed; the sound the wind made as it moved through the trees; the smell of woodsmoke drifting up from the village. Several hours passed before she noticed that the angry, fearful thoughts that churned around her mind constantly had been absent for some time. She wondered at that, but the forest captured her thoughts again. She watched the patterns of shadow shift. The fading light illuminated an autumn tree, and for a moment, it seemed engulfed in flame, and Ilene forgot even to breath. The stillness of the forest filled her, and then she noticed a creature standing before her. Was this her spirit companion come at last? It was a stag, in full antler. She reveled in the creature's stillness and in the silence in her mind, when she felt something snap into place inside her. The magic flared once and enveloped her. The deer's head turned toward her as if he sensed the shift, and it ran off. Ilene waited for the spike of fear that usually accompanied such a failure of her purpose, but it didn't come. :Oh, it will come again: A small whisper echoed in the back of her mind. "What?" She looked around, seeing a small brown rabbit sitting in front of her. Its nose twitched nervously. :The fear, the doubt, it will come back. You'll never be completely free of it. And it may overwhelm you sometimes. But it will never conquer you. All you need to do is return here to the forest to find yourself again. To find hope and believe in yourself.: "Are you my spirit guide?" Its nose twitched again and it blinked. Looking quickly over at a sound to one side, then back at her. :Yes. You may call me what you will.: She hopped closer, and came to rest beside Ilene. The girl was only slightly surprised. She had thought for a moment, the deer… :The deer, all the creatures of the forest, have something to teach you. Stillness, for example. But you and I have something in common I think. We suit one another.: Ilene felt in her mind this strange new sense of peace, and the growing bond between herself and this little creature beside her and knew its words to be true. She wondered what had taken so long for the creature to find her, to help her find her magic. As the sun sank beneath the horizon, and Ilene gathered up rabbit, cushion, and pack, the answer came. :I couldn't find you until you found yourself. After all, magic only works if you believe in it.
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Text and photo by HYPATIA PICKENS
Creative Corner is a new section of RezLibris Magazine that will showcase the many talented, but often unrecognized writers, poets, artists, and other creative individuals in Second Life. If you have a short story, poem, or other work you'd like to submit for possible publication in a future issue, please email it to
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Hypatia Pickens writes (and publishes in real life) poetry and fiction, some of it on display in her booth (pictured) at the Autumn Writers Exhibition. In her First Life, she is a Professor of English specializing in medieval literature, creative writing, cultural and film studies and (of late) New Media. She owns a parcel in Avalon Town, Colleen Kesey's brainchild and artists' city, and holds a weekly open mic event at the Public Library there, called "Strange and Sudden Literature" (Thursday nights, 6pm SLT). Sudden, Flash, or "micro-" fiction has been a recognized genre for some time, now. Hypatia invites any writers and readers who have a taste for the taut, the succinct and the formal, in both story and poem, to share their "sudden literature"; and she courts writers or readers who have a taste for the offbeat, along with genres the Market has marginalized, to share their "strange" literature. Writers of non-strange literature are of course welcome as well, and the intimate gatherings have centered on discussions about genre, writing techniques, and market.
Hypatia's poem "Rez Day" was published recently in The Blue Angel Landing, vol. I, both an on-line and printed poetry magazine that made its debut in August 2009 (http://www.blueangellanding.com). Under her real name she has published in the on-line poetry magazine Centrifugal Eye, a venue she discovered through her SL poetry groups. She is an associate editor of a burgeoning real life journal devoted to virtual reality and education, and still maintains the Rossell Hope Robbins Library of the University of Rochester at Talis Cybrary Island. She found it a horrifying amount of work to produce her very first THiNC Book (which she also illustrated)--and for which "sudden literature" seems most fitting: Poppy's Nightmares (cover shown) Hypatia has a keen interest in the unique artistic outlets provided by Second Life and to that end has imported some of her drawings and paintings. A long-time admirer of the miniature, she is working hard on her building skills for a miniature world.
The following poems are, she feels, some of her most succinct :)

"A Broad Hat"*
By Hypatia Pickens
1 A broad hat shades her raw, green eyes. She lifts her chin, lets suddenly the red sun in, dries her wetted sight then dims the light again.
2 God Ra looks down, sees what fun there is! A raw girl whose hat won’t come undone. He thunders sun. No good; must set and look straight on.
3 What does the winking sun see in beach-combed eyes? A pale girl who waits for him to sink and then there’s no unraveling her clothes at all.
4 The broad hat spreads its cloth to the sky. “She loves another, God of the Sun. I’ll keep you from baking dry her heart and skin. Go on!”
*A quartet of “twisters”: poems or stories fitted into exactly 140 characters—essentially all you have to work with on Twitter.
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“Twenty One (Three Times)”** By Hypatia Pickens
1 Short, lean, muscular, Best to write on a diet, Binding your words While nimble feet fly.
2. I pen longish poems Counting my musings on consonance and pattern. I hate this cage.
3. This cage is a door. Twenty one is all you have To beckon guests Into your glamour.
** A “Twenty-One” poem, invented by ToryLynn Writer, is a verse form requi
ring no more nor less than twenty-one syllables in four lines.
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"Floating, Lovely, Anonymous Notecards" ***
A Tritina by Hypatia Pickens
Oh, my sweet, how you set me floating When I find in my inventory your lovely Poem. But of course you remain anonymous.
How I am tempted by this anonymous Art to set above it my own name floating, But I forget that I must keep you, Lovely,
Safe from plagiarism. I wouldn't feel lovely If I forgot that you are not anonymous, though unwary, and so I quash this floating,
Fearful of not so floating, lovely, or anonymous reproach.
***Learned in Sunnie Beaumont’s Tuesday evening workshop, a tritina is a sestina cut in half, with three repeating words in three stanzas instead of six In six. This poem developed out of a problem unique to Second Life poetry readings: collected notecards distributed by poets who don’t put their names on them.
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“ Gentle”****
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A “Wave Poem” by Hypatia Pickens
Be gentle Be ever so gentle with me For I am thoughtless in my vanity So thoughtless giving no thought to how I could gentle my wilder words
****Learned in Sunnie Beaumont’s Tuesday evening workshop, a “wave” poem keeps a syllabic count of 1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 1
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“Farmer’s Wisdom”*****
A Fibonacci Poem by Hypatia Pickens
Why not Find but Our natural kind! No mystery here: the flower, Using sun by dividing threes, fives, rears up, Unwinding what a rational number wouldn’t. Revering the Golden Cut makes simples confusing.
*****Taught me by Sunnie Beaumont, herself a master of the Fibonacci Poem: this
structure requires lines composed of syllables or words that increase by the numeric intervals related to the Golden Mean: 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, etc.
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“I Wake”******
A Rictameter by Hypatia Pickens
I wake And find the sun Far-advanced in the sky And by and by I understand That I cannot hone my craft by candle Light, and deny the night its dream. But all the steaming world Suffers; so must I wake?
******A Rictameter, so named because it makes the shape of a beak (rictus) on the page, is a poetic structure that requires fifty syllables in nine lines with a syllabic count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2, wherein a) the first and last lines must contain the same syllables, and b) the “beak” of the poem should offer some turning point in the matter. Again, learned in Sunnie Beaumont’s workshop. Thank you, Sunnie.
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FINALLY: a triad of Haiku
“Seething” By Hypatia Pickens
You are all motion. Waves lick the glistening stones. Who can seduce you,
elderly woman? Hair whirling in shear delight-- Beauty in old bones--
Snow! Seething tonight. Hiss of its blinding whiteness On my heart in love!
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Text and Photo by GILBERT SAPWOOD (RL STORYTELLER DALE GILBERT JARVIS)
Creative Corner is a new section of RezLibris Magazine that will showcase the many talented, but often unrecognized writers, poets, artists, and other creative individuals in Second Life. If you have a short story, poem, or other work you'd like to submit for possible publication in a future issue, please email it to
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using "Creative Corner" in the subject line. A photo and short bio of yourself should also be included. Submissions will be accepted on a space available basis at the discretion of the Publisher. No compensation will be provided for any published entries.
The streets of the old walled city were dark, with ancient houses built right out onto the narrow sidewalks, but the moon peeped out from between the buildings, doing her best to light the way.
Two sailors were heading back to their ship, which lay at anchor in the protected harbour. They were returning from a dance, having spent the night flirting with local girls, and enjoying their first shore leave in some time. They walked along, joking with each other.
As they walked through the shadowy streets, they noticed a woman standing in their path. She was dressed in a beautiful, long, flowing black dress with beadwork across the front. She wore an elegant if slightly old-fashioned hat, and her face was hidden behind a veil of black lace.
The young men tipped their hats to her as they approached. As they made to pass by her, much to their suprise, she called out to them.
“Gentlemen,” she said, in a low, warm voice, “I have somehow found myself locked out of my own home. Would you be able to help me?”
Without a moment's hesitation, the two men offered their assistance, saying they would do whatever they could. The woman in black nodded, and beckoned them to follow her with one elegantly gloved hand. She set off through the darkened streets, the men keeping pace alongside her, her heels clicking on the coblestones.
The street ran down the hill towards the water, and as was typical for that part of the town, the houses were built side-by-side, adjoined in a row. Eventually the woman stopped in front of one door.
“Number 16,” she said, pointing to the house.
It was a grand old house, large and stately. It had a great wooden door, painted green, with a brass knocker that gleamed in the moonlight. Either side of the door were two great bay windows than ran from the ground up to the second storey. Heavy wooden shutters barred the windows on the main floor, so nothing could be seen inside, though looking up, the men could see lights shining in the rooms above.
One of the sailors reached into his pocket, and took out a folding knife which he always carried with him. He undid the latch on one of the shutters, opening them up. His friend hoisted him up, then sliding the blade of the knife up between the sashes of the window, he was able to trip the latch, and slide the window open. The sailor climbed in through the window, pushing aside the rich velvet curtains, and found himself standing in a most remarkable room.
The sailor's jaw dropped, as he looked about him. The lady, or her family, were obviously very well off indeed. The room was decorated with antique furniture, and the walls were covered with fine paintings. It was lit with candles which burned in ornate holders, and everywhere was the gleam of gold, silver, and crystal. He quickly made his way to the front door, finding it locked from the inside with a heavy iron key. He turned the key to the lock, and opened the door to admit the lady of the house and his shipmate.
The woman thanked the two men most graciously, and asked if they would come in for a drink. Again, they did not hesitate, more than happy for the opportunity of a both a drink and the company of a young woman.
Once inside, the woman stopped in the hallway where there was hat stand and large mirror. Carefully, she removed the long pins from her hat, and lifted the hat and veil from her head. Looking into the mirror, she patted back her hair, and turned to face the two men.
She was, quite simply, the most beautiful woman either of the men had ever seen, or even dreamed of seeing. Her skin was as pale as alabaster, her lips as red as blood, and her hair as long and black as a winter's night without stars. She ushered the two men into the parlour, and bade them to be seated.
The raven-haired beauty told them to make themselves comfortable while she prepared their refreshment, and left them alone for a moment. The two men looked at each other, hardly daring to speak. They looked around the room, taking in the richness of the furnishings and artwork. Around them, the flickering flames of the candles danced and were reflected back.
Before long, the woman returned with a silver platter on which was a decanter of wine and two crystal goblets. She served the men, but did not take a drink herself. The three of them talked for some time, the woman asking many questions about their stay in the town.
When they had finished the wine, which was the best they had ever tasted, one of the sailors asked if she minded if they smoked. She assured them she did not. He took out a silver cigarette case, offering the lady a cigarette first. She smiled, but declined the offer. He and his companion each took a cigarette, lit them and smoked, conversing for a while longer. When they were finished, they thanked her for the drink, and she in turn thanked them once more for coming to her aid. She showed them to the door, and shook their hands, blessing each of them with a heart-breakingly beautiful smile.
The two men wished her a good night, and as they stepped out onto the street, they heard the click of the heavy iron key turning in the lock behind them. They followed the street downwards towards the harbour, and before too long they found themselves by the gangplank leading to their ship.
Before they boarded, they decided they would have another quick smoke. The sailor with the cigarettes reached down into his pocket, but found it empty.
“Blast!” he exclaimed to his mate, “I've left my cigarette case behind.”
His friend readily agreed to go back with him, so the two men walked back up the hill, retracing their steps, and made their way to the house of the woman in black.
When they arrived at Number 16, they looked at the house in some confusion. It was the same house, but looked dramatically different from the stately home they had visited earlier that evening. The front door was weathered, with peeling paint, and the brass door knocker was old and tarnished. The shutters were gone completely from the windows on the main floor, and the windows themselves had been boarded over. No lights could be seen through the broken panes of the glass in the windows up above. The house looked completely abandoned.
Mystified, the men knocked on the door, but though the sounds of their banging echoed through the street, no one answered their call. They went to the windows, and peered through the cracks in the boards, but saw nothing. Noticing that a few of the boards were loose, they pried them off. Once more, one of the sailors used his knife to jimmy open the window latch. He pushed open the sash, and climbed through.
This time, the sailor found himself in pitch darkness. He struck a match, and looking around, saw that the room was completely empty. The antique furniture, the fine paintings, everything was gone, and in their place were only shadows and long cobwebs. He hastened to the front entrance, found the old iron key still in the lock, turned it, and pushed open the door with a rusty screech.
The two men found the stub of an old candle on thefloor near the doorway, and lighting it, they made their way back to the parlour where the woman had served them wine. It was empty as well. With a quaking hand, one of them pointed down. The floor was thick with dust, but the dust had clearly been disturbed recently, as there were two distinct set of footprints that lead into the room, and back. The men stepped into the room, and comparing the footprints to their own, they saw that they were exactly identical.
Both men could feel the hair raising on the backs of their necks. They immediately turned to leave the room and as they did so, one of them kicked something with his foot, and it skittered across the floor with a metalic clang. He reached down, and picked up the object. It was his own cigarette case.
The men had no desire to remain a minute longer in the house. Quickly, they fled the property, hurrying back to the safety of their bunks onboard ship. Later, they asked some of the local people if anyone lived in the old house at Number 16, and were told that it had been abandoned for as long as anyone could remember. Eventually, they were directed to a very old man who had lived on the street as a boy.
Gilber Sapwood
The old man said that he too had never known anyone to live in the house at Number 16, and that he was sorry he could not help them in their quest for answers. He told them that as children, they had been directed to stay away from the house, as it was believed to be haunted by the ghost of a young woman, who had died in the property many years before he was born.
“I ofttimes looked at that house, hoping to see the ghost,”said the old man with a slightly wistful expression, “But I never did. No one remembers her name, but she was said to be heart-breakinly beautiful, with skin as pale as alabaster, lips as red as blood, and hair as long and black as a winter's night without stars.”
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Love Landed
On the big giant “X” that was my lonely heart. Love landed, with two goliath feet. It announced itself robustly; “Hi, I’m Love”, and I stared blinking, from behind the berry bushes, face smeared with my mother’s raspberries, and wearing worn bunny slippers, that I will never ever throw out.
I pulled out a chair, and welcomed Love to sit. But the chair was too small, and Love just laughed, instead choosing to sit cross legged in front of me.
“I wasn’t expecting you” I said.
“No one ever does”, it replied.
“You are a lot larger than I thought you’d be” I said, looking around at my small life, and all the pieces that bulged at the seams of my small apartment. There was no space. Only Love, who stared down with brown soft eyes that reminded me of fresh chocolate cake and two forks.
“So now what?” I asked, pouring the coffee casual on a table with wobbly legs.
“You tell me” it responded, touching my hand reassuringly.
I sat and contemplated Love’s question.
“How long can you stay?” I asked, looking with great intensity at patterns in my dark black coffee.
“How long will you keep me?” It asked in return. Love is tricky, I thought to myself. It never answers a direct question.
“How about forever?” I asked, eyes boldly upturned, certain that this would send Love running for the hills. After all, that seemed to be the way of the world.
“That’s the plan baby” said Love.
“Okay” said I, with trembling lip, and fighting the urge to cowardly sprint in sloppy floppy cartoon slippers.
Then Love reached over and took my heart into its hands. It squeezed the midnight indigo out, and brought the belly laughs and sidewalk chalk, pillow fights and pillow talk.
And I wept.
Skylar Smythe July 6, 2009 The Guerilla Poetess © 2009
Catching Clouds
He drinks his tea with milk. Facing ever eastward to be nearer to my love, I stand on a crowded city balcony. The scent of moist tomato leaf dances briefly over my nose and through my wistful memory of row upon row of cheery red tomatoes. Amid distant historical reflective retrospection, a black Chihuahua cocks its head, and I realize I have sighed involuntarily once more. He drinks his tea with milk. I swirl a black mug gingerly, watching the foreign show of darkness and light mixing therein. The epic Yin and Yang. A tempest in a teacup. I close my eyes and sip, catching clouds between my lips.
 Skylar Smythe The Guerilla Poetess © 2009
The purpose of www.guerillapoetess.com is to combat the artless life, and my feedback from encourages other artists to share their own stories of "Random Acts of Artfare" that we might inspire a global "ripple effect". On the website you also see a synopsis of my "mission" and unique way that I accomplish that vision in Downtown Toronto, Ontario Canada.
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Angel of Bitter Sweetness Text and Photo by SOUTHERN GEORGIA
A half past a dream soaked night, I found myself groggy and in a cold sweat sitting up at my computer desk chair. I was awake but barely able to comprehend what had transpired between the sheets of my otherwise tranquil slumber. Was it a dream that was so sweet and so seductive? I felt my heart racing, almost thundering out of my chest. So I reached up quickly to check the pulse on my neck. I wanted to make sure I was awake and alive. Yes, I thought, "I’m awake and not dreaming."
I began to reflect on what had just transpired out of a night that started so nice and pleasant. The night began like most typical second life nights full of conversation and pleasantry. The chance to meet new avatars was fun. The fun lasted into the night as I met new avatars who were intelligent enough to carry on a nice conversation. Then there she was. She did not seem like the others. The others were filled with streams of endless chat that ebbed on like endless strings of slurred dribble that seem to blow away in the cool Second Life sky. She was different in a sensual, easy going, laid back sort of way.
She was easy. In fact, she was downright hot, and I was easily caught up in her capacity to draw me into whatever pleased her interests. What I mean to say is, she was easy on the eyes and was easy to chat with. She followed the chat string flowing from one interesting topic to another in a smooth transition that seemed to nourish my inner soul. She was interesting, and she titillated my curiosity with sizzling comments that penetrated my defenses. She explained how easy it was to know me and how I made her smile. We joked about how her avatar had no panties or bra and how mine had a nice package but nothing underneath! There was no holding back as we laughed and chatted the night away.
I was attracted to her world full of intrigue peppered with an abundance of laughter. Chatting in her mansion full of art deco, she enticed me in her chat history about how good our avatars looked together as a couple. Then she teased me about my hair. (Good male hair is so hard to find.) She sarcastically commented, "Looks like you're wearing your hair on backwards." I presumed she was looking at the style of nappy, uncombed freebie hair I had on at the time. So to cure her appetite, I reversed my hair. We laughed so hard our sides hurt. Her sexy female laughter echoed between the ear pieces of my headset.
Soon I was drawn to her magnetic personality. Her heat was beginning to melt me down. The next thing I knew, she was ordering me to come sit next to her. So I did without hesitation. Then she asked me to come closer, and we cuddled. By then the seduction was so strong and she was coming on strong to me. I could tell she knew what she wanted and how to get it. I did not resist. She reached over to hold my hand. I returned the gesture by squeezing her hand and then our fingers inter-twined in a clasp of pure magnetism. Then she yielded just at the right moment to display her soft feminine side. I reached over to kiss her soft moist lips. She typed how our lips met and then our mouths opened slightly inviting me to explore the nature of her sensual seductive side. She captured and trapped me and broke down the hardened walls of living long in Second Life. I crumbled almost into pieces as we started to draw closer into a haze of intimacy.
She felt soft but not to the touch but in my mind. I felt myself collapsing into her gentle folds and being wrapped up in whatever she had to offer. She touched me so tenderly yet with a firmness that could caress the softest petals of a flower. Then, she would pluck the petal cleanly off with her teasing ways. Her words were like silk that I could feel across my perfectly pixilated skin. It was like textured air. When she said, "mmmmmmmmmmmmm,"I could feel her. She had a particular way with which she could make me feel without that real life touch.
I could feel myself growing in her presence as she encouraged me to become all the man I could be. My hands trembled as I tapped away on my keyboard in a rush of misspelled words. I fumbled around, somewhat, not knowing what to say at times or how to lead in the conversation. But she helped me and nurtured me along just at the perfect time. I sometimes felt immature in my adult childlike state of mind. Then, the magic really happened.
She could sense my feelings without me even expressing them in prose. The magic was truly amazing and so real. The connection was direct and strong. The current was flowing and there was real excitement in the air. She seemed angelic with her soft subtle chat. Her words flowed like buttered sugar, and I was high on her sweetness! And then she swept one of her soft angelic wings across my pixilated skin, and I felt like an instrument being played in her hands. She gently motioned me to come over. I gave in completely and let her play me; all of me. Then my eyes rolled back in a shock wave of pure love.
She eased me down as I feverishly tried to regain my composure. I was bathing myself in a shockwave of endless ecstasy wound tight in her closely woven set of words. She eased me down more as I felt myself relaxing in the grips of her prose. Down I went into a dreamlike state of wonder and amazement. And then we dozed off in light chatter lying together in words of peace and rest. I did not really know it but, whatever it was; it felt so good and so pleasing. I had found my angel.
I woke up in a groggy cold sweat in my chair. I woke up but was barely able to comprehend what had happened. "What did happen?" I asked myself. "Was I dreaming or was it a second reality?" My heart was racing, almost thumping out of my chest. I checked myself. "Yes," I said, "I am awake." Then I checked my computer screen trying to see clearly through sleep filled eyes. I looked closer and carefully. I peered through the eyes of my avatar to look for my angel. I camera'ed around and panned in and out to search for her. I shouted out in local chat, but no response came. She was gone without a word or green dot. She had logged off in my sleep, and I had her no more.
My mouth was dry like an empty cardboard box. The remaining taste was no longer sweet, but bitter. All I had left was the dry bitter aftertaste of a Second Life encounter and the memory of my sweet angel.

"Angel of Bitter Sweetness" is Southern Georgia's first attempt at writing about a Second Life experience. He is a SL instructor and builder and a real life Educator of Mathematics and Computer Science. This work inspired him to also create a sculpture (pictured above).
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